by Kate Kelsen
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"The house next door had stood empty since Hazel’s death; without the life of its former owner, it was a shell of a home, dark and dormant. Until one evening in late October, when like lungs taking in a new breath, light filled the house once again....

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Michael Cirignano
Hello there, Really good story. It kept me hooked until the very end and brought back memories of when we used to do similar things as children. Simple but great hook. PS I'm trying to upload mine but I've not sussed this site out yet. :( Look forward to reading more of your work. :)
Susan Pearce Lever
Oooh.i enjoyed the build up of tension in this tale
Ednah Nyatichi
Such a powerful story