Reads like what could be the first chapter of an excellent novel. Technically detailed, I wonder if the author has pilot or cabin crew experience. Would be nice to have chunked it out into smaller paragraphs with gaps between. As currently formatted it strikes the reader as a big dense block of text. Will try more of this author's stuff.

Quite nicely written, flows well and caries the reader along with the story. Pity there was no "ending" - it just hangs in the air so to speak leaving one to wonder what to make of it. So I feel dissatisfied by that and wonder if the author ran out of ideas?