by Dave Weaver
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A drunken and oddly-matched couple in a hotel bedroom about to have sex, then things change a little...

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Keith Sheppard
Quite liked the premise and didn't see the twist coming. One minor typo "Oh God, its still in my bag" needs an apostrophe in it's (can't help always reading with a proof reader's eye).

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