by Fabian de Kerckhove
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Once, the cradle of the world's advancements, until the Doom. The scar unhealing that generations after still fear. The wound in the land that never would fade. The scourge of civilisation upon one girl. A tale of nature's indifference, and of hu...

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Jacques Hampel
Tangible chaos. Very well executed prose and I felt a real pace to the story as well. A little short, however, but I think you've made it work like that.
Tony Perrott
Too much word juggling of abstract words for me. Not a story that goes anywhere but but down into Hades. No soul to it
Admin CMS
This is an interesting piece, with precise grammar, presentation and pace. It was short but at the same time provided a basis for further writing.